Thursday, March 5, 2015

Slice of Life Day 5 - The Drive

This post was inspired by my drive home tonight. 
The moon was full as I passed by snow covered fields.

 Full.
Gleaming.
Shining across the field of snow.
Chasing me until the fields end.
The quiet crunch of winter.
Peaceful.
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5 comments:

  1. PAMELA HODGESMarch 5, 2015 at 9:04 PM

    the quiet crunch of winter

    Your little poem is Full of strong images. gleaming, shining, chasing, vivid strong movements, and then quiet and peace.

    thank you. :)

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  2. PAMELA HODGESMarch 5, 2015 at 9:04 PM

    the quiet crunch of winter

    Your little poem is Full of strong images. gleaming, shining, chasing, vivid strong movements, and then quiet and peace.

    thank you. :)

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  3. elsieMarch 6, 2015 at 6:13 AM

    Love the nature inspired pieces! What images you create, nice job!

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  4. AnonymousMarch 6, 2015 at 4:53 PM

    I was immediately drawn to the shape of your poem-and then the beautiful images! Lovely!!

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  5. AnonymousMarch 8, 2015 at 1:46 AM

    This poem is really relaxing! It tells us about the beauty of nature. Even though it is a very short poem, it brings a lot of feelings and emotions. I actually haven't thought writing a poem as a SOL.
    Ava [ a 3rd grader ]

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